Sebentuk Kata Untuk "D"

Di sini, kutuliskan kembali namamu dan namaku
Ku lukis dengan tinta terindah yang aku miliki
agar seisi dunia dapat membacanya

Lihatlah, "D"
Aku menggantungnya di tepi pelangi
Agar dapat kau pandangi, walau kau tak ada di sini

"D", aku masih tersesat dalam labirin prasangka
Mencoba mencari celah tuk kembali,
Walau sulit menepis ego diri

"D", tunggulah sejenak lagi...
Aku masih hanyut dalam sesalku sendiri
Meratap setiap peristiwa yang ku iris perih di hatimu

"D", dapatkah kau lebur semua kecewamu?
Kembali kita lalui jejak-jejak kabut persahabatan kita
Walau riuh gemuruh di hati kita tentang alpa lama

"D", walau simpul ini tlah cidera,
Mungkinkah rindang persahabatan kita kembali tumbuh dan merekah?
Walau kadang angin datang menerpa, menggugurkan rasa yang kita punya

"D", atas buram yang kulakukan
Dan setiap letupan hati yang membuatku bungkam
Ku giring semua rasa kembali..

"D", maafkan aku...

Akhir September 2010

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Oct 5, '10 oncomko said dedellllllllllllllllllllll......................puisiiiiiiiiiii lo kereeeeeeeeeeeeeeen kayaaaa gw.... wkwkw hahahhahaaaaaaaa.........lebaaaaaaaaaaaaaaayy kayak lo dul :))

delete reply oncomko wrote on Oct 5, '10 dedellllllllllllllllllllll......................puisiiiiiiiiiii lo kereeeeeeeeeeeeeeen kayaaaa gw.... wkwkw

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 30, '10 fitrahkautsar said hmmm...hmmmm...ada apa ini.??.ada apa ini...??? *mengendapendappergilewatpintubelakang ada orang keren yg namanya Amirah Mumtaz :p

delete reply fitrahkautsar wrote on Sep 30, '10 adamdesign said iya mencurigakan,..... ayo ngaku klo gak mo jadi tersangka :p hmmm...hmmmm...ada apa ini.??.ada apa ini...??? *mengendapendappergilewatpintubelakang

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 firdausza said Nice poem:-) makasih ^___^

delete reply firdausza wrote on Sep 28, '10 Nice poem:-)

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said wakakakakak... lebih2... :)) :p heehhehe...

delete reply fr0z3ninside wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said bukan tauuuuuuuuuuuuu kalo pemerasan tuh ya 4 porsi kebab plus 4 porsi es cendol :D wakakakakak... lebih2... :)) :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said jaaah *pemerasan,, :)) bukan tauuuuuuuuuuuuu kalo pemerasan tuh ya 4 porsi kebab plus 4 porsi es cendol :D

delete reply fr0z3ninside wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said heeu...wait mulluw... jadi dobel yah...4 porsi :D jaaah *pemerasan,, :))

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 redchrysant said D itu DILA....hohoho.... iya deh iyaa... :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 destipurnamasari said ketularan ge-er,, d u/ desti :D ini baru pas.. hihihihihi... :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 hwibntato said saya mau beli jamu dulu ... tolak angin ya om :D

delete reply redchrysant wrote on Sep 28, '10 D itu DILA....hohoho....

delete reply destipurnamasari wrote on Sep 28, '10, edited on Sep 28, '10 ketularan ge-er,, d u/ desti :D ini baru pas..

delete reply hwibntato wrote on Sep 28, '10 saya mau beli jamu dulu ...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said d kan "DERAISA" haha sotoy marotoy deeh...

delete reply deraisa wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said d kan "DERAISA" haha apa deh pak Adam.....

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said cukup minum jamu 3x sehari :)) Kunyit asem ye pak :D

delete reply adamdesign wrote on Sep 28, '10 deraisa said Liat HS ides deh...xixixi ^^ d kan "DERAISA" haha

delete reply adamdesign wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said hhhmm....mencurigakan neeh... iya mencurigakan,..... ayo ngaku klo gak mo jadi tersangka :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 nuqiechan21 said menyimak... *Alhamdulillah,,,nambah ilmu lagi Alhamdulillah ^__^

delete reply adamdesign wrote on Sep 28, '10 hwibntato said Anda lelaki beruntung, Mas ... he he he ... *apa rahasianya? cukup minum jamu 3x sehari :))

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 deraisa said aduh.....so sweet banget mbak.....jazaakillahu khair yakkkk ^_______________^ *haha GR banget deh ideeess* waiyyaki ^___^ gpp, di ijinin kok ge er :D

delete reply deraisa wrote on Sep 28, '10 Liat HS ides deh...xixixi ^^

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 menyimak... *Alhamdulillah,,,nambah ilmu lagi

delete reply deraisa wrote on Sep 28, '10 aduh.....so sweet banget mbak.....jazaakillahu khair yakkkk ^_______________^ *haha GR banget deh ideeess*

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said aku ingin mencintai seperti pohon pisang :))))) jiaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said http://sejuta-puisi.blogspot.com/ meluncuuuuuuuuuuuuuurrr...

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said Pak Sapardi itu yg puisinya" aku ingin mencintaimu seperti... (eh gmn deh om...lupa :p) aku ingin mencintai seperti pohon pisang :)))))

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said yg mana tuh puisinya say?? waah...jd pengen baca... http://sejuta-puisi.blogspot.com/

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said saya juga suka, tapi tidak semua :) Sapardi memang salah satu maestro puisi, pengajar di fak sastra UI. Menyabet beberapa penghargaan. coba baca puisi TS Pinang. Asyik juga Pak Sapardi itu yg puisinya" aku ingin mencintaimu seperti... (eh gmn deh om...lupa :p)

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 vivfee said kalo ak suka bgt puisinya hasan aspahani ma sapardhi jp. Diksinya oke punya,hehe saya juga suka, tapi tidak semua :) Sapardi memang salah satu maestro puisi, pengajar di fak sastra UI. Menyabet beberapa penghargaan. coba baca puisi TS Pinang. Asyik juga

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 vivfee said kalo ak suka bgt puisinya hasan aspahani ma sapardhi jp. Diksinya oke punya,hehe yg mana tuh puisinya say?? waah...jd pengen baca...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fitrahkautsar said ada deh..orangnya gak mau dsebut... hhhmm....mencurigakan neeh...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said Sipp...ditunggu karya2nya. enaknya di MP, matang atau mentah, kita bebas mempublish tulisan. Tentunya, masukan dari pembaca yang kritis, sangat penting dalam hal ini, untuk memperbaiki kualitas tulisan di masa mendatang. thx juga yahh...^^ iyaa nih..jadi tambah semangaats ^^ hoo ooh, om kasih masukan terus yaah...masih perlu banyak belajar nih akuu... di tunggu nih om tutorial puisinya... :D

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10, edited on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said oohh... okeh om...ntar coba bikin puisi lagi yg diksinya lebih manteeeb ^^b Makasih ya om ilmunya :D Sipp...ditunggu karya2nya. enaknya di MP, matang atau mentah, kita bebas mempublish tulisan. Tentunya, masukan dari pembaca yang kritis, sangat penting dalam hal ini, untuk memperbaiki kualitas tulisan di masa mendatang. thx juga yahh...^^

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said ini contoh diksi yang dipakai WS rendra dalam puisinya : Surat Cinta manteeeeeeeebb...

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 vivfee said om suga kereeen,suka sama puisinya,hehehe, *adain training nulis puisi om,hoho Itu bukan puisi saya :) itu puisi rendra :p *lagi digodok tutorialnya, masih belum selesai. Thx sudah mengingatkan kembali tentang hal ini.

delete reply vivfee wrote on Sep 28, '10 kalo ak suka bgt puisinya hasan aspahani ma sapardhi jp. Diksinya oke punya,hehe

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said kala langit menangis dan dua ekor belibis bercintaan dalam kolam bagai dua anak nakal jenaka dan manis mengibaskan ekor serta menggetarkan bulu-bulunya, ini juga contoh diksi yang dipadu bahasa figuratif :)

delete reply fitrahkautsar wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said sapa yg nyuruh??? hhmm... ada deh..orangnya gak mau dsebut...

delete reply vivfee wrote on Sep 28, '10 om suga kereeen,suka sama puisinya,hehehe, *adain training nulis puisi om,hoho

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said kala hujan gerimis bagai bunyi tambur yang gaib, ini contoh diksi yang dipakai WS rendra dalam puisinya : Surat Cinta

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said diksi itu 'pilihan kata' yang dipakai oleh pengarang, yang membuat puisi terasa khas; berbeda dengan puisi lain dan tidak klise. :) tergantung diri sendiri, sebenarnya. Mau memilih diksi yang mana. :) oohh... okeh om...ntar coba bikin puisi lagi yg diksinya lebih manteeeb ^^b Makasih ya om ilmunya :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fitrahkautsar said wow.... *dsuruh komen oleh seseorang.... sapa yg nyuruh??? hhmm...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 carrotsoup said itu D ato O sih? kurang jelas kebacanya... *Omali komen* omali makanyajgn pake kacamata iteem dung bacanya...

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said diksi tu apaan om? :D iya nih, emang ngerasa sih puisinya masih banyak kekurangannya...tp maksain aja di posting :D gmn om biar bagusnya?? diksinya di tambahin apa?? diksi itu 'pilihan kata' yang dipakai oleh pengarang, yang membuat puisi terasa khas; berbeda dengan puisi lain dan tidak klise. :) tergantung diri sendiri, sebenarnya. Mau memilih diksi yang mana. :)

delete reply fitrahkautsar wrote on Sep 28, '10, edited on Sep 28, '10 wow.... *dsuruh komen oleh seseorang....

delete reply carrotsoup wrote on Sep 28, '10 itu D ato O sih? kurang jelas kebacanya... *Omali komen*

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said Oh, gitu...:) trus pengamennya dikasih berapa? :-P kenapa nggak tukang ngamennya yg dijadikan inspirasi? :) lupa ngasih berapa :D lah wong yg kepikiran lagi yg lain kok :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said saya belum melihat kekuatan diksi di sini diksi tu apaan om? :D iya nih, emang ngerasa sih puisinya masih banyak kekurangannya...tp maksain aja di posting :D gmn om biar bagusnya?? diksinya di tambahin apa??

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 vivfee said mb amirah keren puisinya,hehehe, bgus bgt,v suka makasih ^__^

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said terinspirasi dari sono om, pas denger tukang ngamen di kereta..trus langsung buka hape wat bikin puisi inih :p Oh, gitu...:) trus pengamennya dikasih berapa? :-P kenapa nggak tukang ngamennya yg dijadikan inspirasi? :)

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said huaaaaaaaaaaaaa...!!! nangis gulingan2an T__T kurang kencang nangisnya :))) saya belum melihat kekuatan diksi di sini :) coba bandingkan dengan puisi berikut, yang sama2 ditujukan untuk seseorang :) Kutulis surat ini kala hujan gerimis bagai bunyi tambur yang gaib, Dan angin mendesah mengeluh dan mendesah, Wahai, dik Narti, aku cinta kepadamu ! Kutulis surat ini kala langit menangis dan dua ekor belibis bercintaan dalam kolam bagai dua anak nakal jenaka dan manis mengibaskan ekor serta menggetarkan bulu-bulunya, Wahai, dik Narti, kupinang kau menjadi istriku ! Kaki-kaki hujan yang runcing menyentuhkan ujungnya di bumi, Kaki-kaki cinta yang tegas bagai logam berat gemerlapan menempuh ke muka dan tak kan kunjung diundurkan Selusin malaikat telah turun di kala hujan gerimis Di muka kaca jendela mereka berkaca dan mencuci rambutnya untuk ke pesta Wahai, dik Narti dengan pakaian pengantin yang anggun bunga-bunga serta keris keramat aku ingin membimbingmu ke altar untuk dikimpoikan Aku melamarmu, Kau tahu dari dulu: tiada lebih buruk dan tiada lebih baik dari yang lain… penyair dari kehidupan sehari-hari, orang yang bermula dari kata kata yang bermula dari kehidupan, pikir dan rasa

delete reply vivfee wrote on Sep 28, '10 mb amirah keren puisinya,hehehe, bgus bgt,v suka

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said larik di atas, kok agak2 mirip dengan lagu ebiet: Camilia 3? :) "Di sini dibatu ini akan kutuliskan lagi namaku dan namamu " terinspirasi dari sono om, pas denger tukang ngamen di kereta..trus langsung buka hape wat bikin puisi inih :p

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10, edited on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said Di sini, kutuliskan kembali namamu dan namaku larik di atas, kok agak2 mirip dengan lagu ebiet: Camilia 3? :) "Di sini dibatu ini akan kutuliskan lagi namaku dan namamu "

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said Lho, ini puisi yah? :) gubyakkss huaaaaaaaaaaaaa...!!! nangis gulingan2an T__T

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 hu uh *kaburrr

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 salwa05 said pada geer kabeh,,, puisinya bagus,,, ^^ sukkaa deh... hehehehe... makasih say ^___^

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 nuqiechan21 said kak pemetik bunga nih ngaku2. wong mb amirah manggil sy kok dia emang suka ge er de..

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said hehhehee...ada om suga...jd pengen malluw... gmn om puisiku ini? ga bagus ya? :D Lho, ini puisi yah? :) gubyakkss

delete reply salwa05 wrote on Sep 28, '10 pada geer kabeh,,, puisinya bagus,,, ^^ sukkaa deh...

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 saturindu said iya D :) hehhehee...ada om suga...jd pengen malluw... gmn om puisiku ini? ga bagus ya? :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 jaraway said ga suka dipanggil Dek.. ogah banget..hiiiii..serem..hahaha baiklah :)

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 kak pemetik bunga nih ngaku2. wong mb amirah manggil sy kok

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 hwibntato said Anda lelaki beruntung, Mas ... he he he ... *apa rahasianya? lah??? kok?? heeeu -_____-

delete reply saturindu wrote on Sep 28, '10 iya D :)

delete reply jaraway wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said huehehhehe...biariin :p bisa tauu...Dek Fajar :)) ga suka dipanggil Dek.. ogah banget..hiiiii..serem..hahaha

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 hwibntato said wah, puisinya indah, nih ... he he he ... suka ...! Makasih om :)

delete reply hwibntato wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said dek adam :D Anda lelaki beruntung, Mas ... he he he ... *apa rahasianya?

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 jaraway said jiakakakakkakakaka.... nah lho mba Amir.... banyak yang geer dah.. wkwkwkwk.. fajar ga bisa dijadiin De... hiks.. *pulang..wkwkw huehehhehe...biariin :p bisa tauu...Dek Fajar :))

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said hmm bu amirah, makasih ya atas puisinya :D jiaah..nih lg ada yg ge er -___-

delete reply hwibntato wrote on Sep 28, '10 wah, puisinya indah, nih ... he he he ... suka ...!

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 pemetikbungakematian said boleh dong ge er,lom ada pasalnya kok :p baiklaah...

delete reply jaraway wrote on Sep 28, '10 jiakakakakkakakaka.... nah lho mba Amir.... banyak yang geer dah.. wkwkwkwk.. fajar ga bisa dijadiin De... hiks.. *pulang..wkwkw

delete reply adamdesign wrote on Sep 28, '10 hmm bu amirah, makasih ya atas puisinya :D

delete reply pemetikbungakematian wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said yee...ge er deeh -__- boleh dong ge er,lom ada pasalnya kok :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said dek adam :D GUBRAAAAAAAKKSSS...!!!

delete reply ulict wrote on Sep 28, '10 adamdesign said dek adam :D jiah...:))

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 pemetikbungakematian said merasa terpanggil ne.. yee...ge er deeh -__-

delete reply adamdesign wrote on Sep 28, '10 dek adam :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 nuqiechan21 said asiiikkk... siapa mb? tuuh yg lg di pojokan :p

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delete reply pemetikbungakematian wrote on Sep 28, '10 merasa terpanggil ne..

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 asiiikkk... siapa mb?

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said jiaaaaaaaaaahhh.. :)) :D just wait.. ;p heeu...wait mulluw... jadi dobel yah...4 porsi :D

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delete reply fr0z3ninside wrote on Sep 28, '10 jejak2mimpi said kebabnya mana?? jiaaaaaaaaaahhh.. :)) :D just wait.. ;p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 nuqiechan21 said mencuim bau-bau makanan disini.... tuuh ada yg mo nraktir :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said wisss selametan neh mbakyuu.. wkwkwk :p ga ngundang2 T_T

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 ikhwatiislam said dah diah ma indah baikan, lho?! hihihihihii... :P

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 mencuim bau-bau makanan disini....

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 ulict said kumaafkan....*dari "D" makasiiiiiihh ^__^

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said baiklah saya maafkan.. :D :p kebabnya mana??

delete reply fr0z3ninside wrote on Sep 28, '10 jaraway said sejak kapan jenengmu dadi Darbi? wkwkwkkw wisss selametan neh mbakyuu.. wkwkwk :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 jaraway said wah.... D ya........sapa tuhhh sapa aja buleeeeeeeeeeeeehh :p

delete reply ikhwatiislam wrote on Sep 28, '10 dah diah ma indah baikan, lho?!

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on Sep 28, '10 nuqiechan21 said cieee mb amirah... ga usah gitu kalee mb.. aku sdh memaafkanmu kok * "D" untuk DedehMurniasihe hehehhee.. ^___^

delete reply ulict wrote on Sep 28, '10 kumaafkan....*dari "D"

delete reply jaraway wrote on Sep 28, '10 fr0z3ninside said baiklah saya maafkan.. :D :p sejak kapan jenengmu dadi Darbi? wkwkwkkw

delete reply fr0z3ninside wrote on Sep 28, '10 baiklah saya maafkan.. :D :p

delete reply jaraway wrote on Sep 28, '10 wah.... D ya........sapa tuhhh

delete reply nuqiechan21 wrote on Sep 28, '10 cieee mb amirah... ga usah gitu kalee mb.. aku sdh memaafkanmu kok * "D" untuk DedehMurniasihe