Masih Menunggumu

Kala hujan mengusik ruang sendu
Merintik deras pada harap yang kian layu
Dinginnya menyesap hingga ke pori-pori kalbu
Membuat jiwa-jiwa penat kian sayu
Dan serahkan penantian pada detik waktu

Malam semakin kelam, dan hujan terus menghujam
Kala sebulir doa terdengar bergumam
Akankah datang ia yang di nanti-nantikan??
Tuk membawaku arungi panjangnya perjalanan
Duhai keretaku, aku masih menunggumu....

*** Mei 2010 @stasiun, kala keretaku tak kunjung datang

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 12, '10 semangatdafa said lama,aku tidak berpuisi... nice poems ayooo...bikin puisi lagi ^_^ thanks sist ^__^

delete reply semangatdafa wrote on May 12, '10 lama,aku tidak berpuisi... nice poems

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 oncomko said ketika kereta tlah tiba.. hatiku...bersorak dengan gembira.. ku bilang..akhirnya kau datang juga... sambil membawa sang pangeran berkuda.... :D *kumehong carana coba aya kuda di gerbong ka ekonomi anu pinuh...ckckck...lieur urang wakakakakakaak... pangerannya sambil ngejar2 keretanya :))

delete reply oncomko wrote on May 11, '10 ketika kereta tlah tiba.. hatiku...bersorak dengan gembira.. ku bilang..akhirnya kau datang juga... sambil membawa sang pangeran berkuda.... :D *kumehong carana coba aya kuda di gerbong ka ekonomi anu pinuh...ckckck...lieur urang

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 @juragan pete, bodo aah..!! @biliksukma, emang,kereta sering ingkar janji..huuff.. @pengagumlangit, huehehe..slain langit, aku jg suka hujan ^_^

delete reply pengagumlangit wrote on May 11, '10 hujan lagi..hujan..lagi.. tapi kali ini endingnya kereta ya?? hmmm..dimana2 hujan endingnya pelangi..hahaha.. mantebz..^_^

delete reply biliksukma wrote on May 11, '10 wew.. nantap.. ketika kereta ingkar janji. untuk datang lebih dini..hihihi :)

delete reply gehenx wrote on May 11, '10 Tuh kan? Haghaha

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 hahahaha...dua2nya dah :D

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 gehenx said Pis piss y becanda.. V^^v huuuuuuuuuuuuuhh..!!!

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 gehenx said Kereta dalam arti yg lain kereta kencana ato bisa dibilang kendaraan yg biasa di naiki pengantin baru.. Wkwkwk :p dasaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaarrr.....sotoooooooooooooooooooooooyyy....!!!!

delete reply lautankata wrote on May 11, '10 menunggu kereta atau yg ada di dalam kereta mba? xixixi....

delete reply gehenx wrote on May 11, '10 Pis piss y becanda.. V^^v

delete reply gehenx wrote on May 11, '10 Kereta dalam arti yg lain kereta kencana ato bisa dibilang kendaraan yg biasa di naiki pengantin baru.. Wkwkwk :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 jinggaituorange said tut.. tut.. tut.. naik kereta api... ^^ tuuu..tuuut..tuuut....siapa yg mau ikuuuuttt???

delete reply jinggaituorange wrote on May 11, '10 tut.. tut.. tut.. naik kereta api... ^^

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 redchrysant said xixixixi.... kalo buatnya dari hati pasti menyentuh hati pasti kerenz ^ ^ huehehhehe...jadi pengen maluuu... :p

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 gehenx said Ada makna lain sepertina di balik kata kereta.. Hemmm sotoynya kumaatzz...

delete reply redchrysant wrote on May 11, '10 xixixixi.... kalo buatnya dari hati pasti menyentuh hati pasti kerenz ^ ^

delete reply gehenx wrote on May 11, '10 Ada makna lain sepertina di balik kata kereta.. Hemmm

edit delete reply jejak2mimpi wrote on May 11, '10 redchrysant said keren banget mba... ^ ^ buatan sendiri ? hooh semalem pas lg nunggu kereta :D

delete reply redchrysant wrote on May 11, '10 keren banget mba... ^ ^ buatan sendiri ?